Monday, June 22, 2009

Break free!!

As the sun dawns over the mountains
The early morning beads of moisture glitters over the leaves
The thin waves of wind touch your feet
And as the chirpy little birds address the green world to rise

Happiness is relished by the fresh minds
As the flower blooms by
However the freshness and fragrance at times
Is perturbed later during the day

So break free from the dubious world
Endeavor to be blissful, as mankind needs to be
And throw away all thy worries
Across the dusk that retreats away

2 comments:

  1. Patha nahin tha ki you could write soo well re :P.
    Loved the first and last line...written really well.The last stanza has also come out very well...hope we can "BREAK FREE" as u say :)

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  2. Always knew you could write so very well…even before u started doing it. Liked the way the posts on the blog are following a common thread, an innate desire to live every moment of life in the most blissful way and turning the atmosphere around great. This particular one, well… kinda lets you touch, in a moment, all emotions you experience during a single day and just stays on your mind…making it hard to break free from it!

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